Sample 1:
It was our pleasure to see you again at our Doe dealership on March 15. We know you recognize quality at a good price when you see it, and we want to help you get that new van! Our salesman, John Doe, contacted you March 20 to inform you that your credit looked good. He said you would contact us with a decision, and we are still eager to hear from you.

Since we have a long-standing professional relationship with you, we are in a position to offer you a special lease on a light green luxury van with leather interior. With the trade-in value of your present van, you can lease this van for $329 a month, $40 less than our new customer rate. However, our regional manager will let us extend this offer for only one more week. Please call us or come in to the dealership as soon as possible.
Sample 2:
Last month I sent you our catalog and gave you the opportunity to order merchandise at a drastically reduced price. This offer ends soon, and I haven’t heard from you, so I can’t help but think you have overlooked this unusual opportunity.

You have often mentioned how satisfied your customers have been with our merchandise, and I know how important it is for you to please them. Maybe this is the time for you to take a minute and browse through our catalog again.

In addition to offering a payment plan to fit your budget and a discount of 25%, we will take an extra 5% off if you order before the end of the quarter. But hurry! The quarter is over in just a few short weeks!
Sample 3:
Now that you have had some time to picture yourself driving a new sports car from Doe Motors, what do you think? Our sales representative, Jane Doe, spoke to you about our new low-interest financing for the ’97 Sportif. I wanted to give you every opportunity to accept this amazing offer before it runs out at the end of the month. You loved the ’95 model, and we are pleased to hear that it has been virtually maintenance-free. If you buy now, Doe Motors will take $50 off the price of the stereo system. But don’t forget, low-interest financing is only good for the next two weeks. Call now to reserve your 2002 Sportif and drive the car of the century.

source: monster.com

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